Titles are important. They are the single item visible on Craigslist that will get you that click you want from renters. Based on this fact, titles should be informative and creative to attract the attention of the renters who are already overwhelmed by the number of caps-lock listings they see running down the page.
This being said, take a look at the title above. While the price for the 4 bedroom unit seems like a steal due to its Section 8 status, it doesn’t reveal much else. The ad succeeds in being eye-catching because it offers a great price for the number of rooms, but it’s also hurting its chances of getting more interested viewers because of its lack of information. Sure, it reveals that it qualifies for low-income subsidized housing, but if you look at the most typical Craigslist posts, the title will include the price and number of bedrooms/bathrooms as well as the unit’s features. This title stops short of giving valuable information, and could definitely use some work.
Now take a look at the body of the listing. There are quite a few problems, most notably the lack of information. When apartment hunters are looking for a place to live, they don’t want to have to call you just to find out exactly how many bathrooms there are (possibly one, but this ad doesn’t make it clear), or whether or not there’s laundry on-site. The search process is already complicated enough without you giving them next to no information.
The field for your listing on Craigslist allows you to enter in more than one sentence — use it! Visitors will appreciate whatever information you give them, and in this case, the unclear, punctuation-free listing only confuses them. Write in sentences or highlight the features in bullet points. Even if your unit is nicely priced, they’ll still pass you by because this listing is absent of all the details that would help in their search. Be clear and descriptive, renters don’t want to guess at your words, they want to know exactly what they’ll be paying for!
Writing a Craigslist ad might not be your forte, but spend a few extra minutes writing a better description and your efforts will definitely pay off.










